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Red roses,
they mean Love or careness
Yellow roses,
they mean friendship...
white roses,
innocence is what it means.
Which Rose is suited for you?
:iconsasuke-fan101:

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ya...dunno

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:iconephriokko:
Short, but cute. :aww:

I'd love to help you improve your poetry, so would you mind if I pointed out a few things that (if fixed) might add more interest into your stuff? =)

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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." —~CalamityKangaroo
:iconsasuke-fan101:
That be great!

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Don't fight! Make things right!
:iconephriokko:
Let's start there... :XD:

"That be great!" is a grammatically incorrect sentence, I'm afraid.... :iconotlplz: I'm assuming you're trying to say "That would be great!" which would be abbreviated as "That'd be great!" But "That be great!" isn't a correct way to say the sentence. ^^;

:3

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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." —~CalamityKangaroo
:iconsasuke-fan101:
^^; I thought you meant poem.
But thanks

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Don't fight! Make things right!
:iconephriokko:
I did mean the poem originally. ^^;

Also, uh, "I thought you meant the poem."

:iconfacepalmplz:

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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." —~CalamityKangaroo
:iconsasuke-fan101:
OTL

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Don't fight! Make things right!
:iconsasuke-fan101:
I fail

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Don't fight! Make things right!
:iconephriokko:
^^; Sorryyyyy

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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." —~CalamityKangaroo
:iconbabylonianprince-3kp:
short but lovely!

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:jsenn:What you get from pretty words,
You half-heartedly put down on papers
Is just a desperately put together,
An empty story of pretty words.:jsenn:

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