Red roses,
they mean Love or careness
Yellow roses,
they mean friendship...
white roses,
innocence is what it means.
Which Rose is suited for you?
Red roses, they mean Love or careness Yellow roses, they mean friendship... white roses, innocence is what it means. Which Rose is suited for you? |
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I'd love to help you improve your poetry, so would you mind if I pointed out a few things that (if fixed) might add more interest into your stuff?
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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." ~CalamityKangaroo
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Don't fight! Make things right!
"That be great!" is a grammatically incorrect sentence, I'm afraid....
:3
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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." ~CalamityKangaroo
But thanks
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Don't fight! Make things right!
Also, uh, "I thought you meant the poem."
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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." ~CalamityKangaroo
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Don't fight! Make things right!
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Don't fight! Make things right!
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"So,what you're saying is that you're not 'angry' mad, but you're 'Eating paint chips with my imaginary friend named Hobart who doesn't like acrylics because he thinks they taste too fruity' mad..." ~CalamityKangaroo
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You half-heartedly put down on papers
Is just a desperately put together,
An empty story of pretty words.
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